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Original SubmissionJuly 26, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-29648The Experience of Pedagogical Training on Postgraduate Health Professionals in Rehabilitation: a Qualitative StudyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Battista, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 09 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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To make sure your knowledge reach to the global and local community who can benefit form this evidence, I strongly recommend you consider the revision recommended to improve your result and discussion presentations. Finally, it will be great to have a language support to improve the presentation. Thank you! Abstract Line #35+ Result: Participants description and the finding could be improved with better presentation as the current one is confusing. E.g. …with average age 33 ± 9 and majority women (n=12). Three themes were developed: 1) “A Brave New Pedagogical World” …. 2) ….. and 3) …. Line #40+ Discussion: I recommend replacing ‘discussion’ by ‘conclusion’ as we are not actually discussing at the abstract. Also, this part states a kind of recommendation to implement this education. However, the study doesn’t test about the impact of this training on the impact of the training their education practice. Hence, we don’t have evidence to say it is effective and recommend for implementation at large scale. I think, there is another stage next to this study, evaluation of the impact of this training. Introduction Line #48-53: You set a foundation, but would make more sense to add a context where the existing education system is impacting the quality of graduates (in their service – be it in clinical or education practices) so as to justify the need to improve the pedagogical skills of educators could add value to the quality of graduates. Line #60+: You could provide the Italian context of what is happening and what is know about the current practice. Line #70: The statement “meanings attached to education are influenced by ethnicity, living area, and working background” require citation. Line #78-79: The statement “The study complied with the Declaration of Helsinki” need be linked with the its purpose/function like the way you described after the connector “and” Line #84+, Participants description: Some of the partis in the first paragraph could be moved to provide a context about Italy in the introduction section, but with citation. Line #86-87: The sentences that started with “This MSc…” doesn’t flow well. Your want to indicate the structure and contents of the education program, but it needs improvement. Line #96: The statement “purposely sampled to identify those who were more informative to answer the research question”, what criteria in your sampling process were used to identify those who are “more informative to answer the research question”? Some details about the criteria would add values. Line #97-98: Same comment as above that is about “This MSc…” Line #101-103: The point describe in this sentence is not convincing as relevant to the research questions as these roles are not specific to educational experience. Line #125: use either the full term “focus group discussions” or FGD once you fully describe when you first use it. Line #128: “At the beginning of each meeting …” seems that you have multiple meetings within a specific group. So, it is better to describe as “prior to each focus group discussions, ….” Line #129: The statement “A brief presentation of each participant followed this introduction by the researchers” is confusing, so consider revision to add clarity or remove. Line #122-139: Generally the interviewing process is too detailed, particularly since you have already included the interview guides, descriptions related to the flow of questions were a redundant point. Line #143, Table 1: Consider improving the table format as the current structure is not in its best way. Overall question on data acquisition: What was the language used to facilitate the focus group discussion (data generation process)? If you use any language other than English, what was it? When and how did you translate it to English language, providing that the manuscript is prepared in English? Who did the translation and why? I am forwarding these points as they are critical for the research rigor and for the quality of the evidence generated. Line #146-150: I recommend to move most of these parts to the declaration of co-authors’ contribution. Line #152-157, Data analysis: The reference guiding your analysis can be cited once at the beginning and then no need to repeatedly mention after each sentence in the same paragraph. Line #156-157: The last statement here needs improvement for clarity, as it confuses due to citation of the table which you could have cited it at the end of the statement. Consider revision Line #159, Table 2: I don’t think this content need a table as it is possible to describe the steps and actions taken at that stage, who did it, if needed. Results Line #164: use either the full term “focus group discussions” or FGD once you fully describe when you first use it. Line #164-165: The statement “Three focus groups were conducted in September 2023 with seventeen Italian participants” is repetition and result is not its relevant place as you have already escribed it in the methods section. Line #164-165: See my comment above, at the abstract section, the result part for a better way of presenting the data. Line #165: Delete “Table 3 reported participants’ demographic information.” As t doesn’t add value, rather you may cite the table at some point in this paragraph. Across the manuscript, search the words “focus groups” and try to either write them fully as “focus group discussions” or replace with its application (FGDs) Line #169: The statement “the reader will find the description of each theme with …” need revision using active voice or the whole sentence need revision “In the following subsections, the reader will find the description of each theme with a table containing the primary quotes that brought the research to generate the specific themes.” Across the manuscript, I would recommend to use Male/Female rather than Man/Woman. Line #172, Table 3: Make sure the information about the working area couldn’t cause any ethical breaches as it can be used to relate with a specific participant by linking with the other characteristics across the document. Also, you may need to consider if this information is really relevant/would add value to the research anyways. Line #173: Thee Legend “ID” may not directly identification number as it is not only a number and has a letter within the code. May be this can be “participants unique code” Line #175-243: Presentation of the three themes I can see there are three themes generated from the data and that you have presented them in detail within a table, with a number of quotes. That is a great depth, but that again makes the result to appear at very breadth level, and lack some level of depth analysis to present it as a manuscript. The paragraphs under each themes have great description and attempted to cover most of the points. However, non of them were structured as a conceptual description of the themes and sub-themes, if what you have presented in the table are sub-themes. It is highly recommended to describe them explicitly. Present each theme with their sub-themes and associated quotes need to be integrated with the presentation of your interpretation. The tables have so much detailed quotes that can be used as additional file, if needed to provide the details, but the results need major revision to rewrite the themes and sub-themes with associated quote, probably one or two quotes could be presented, using various formats of presenting the quotes. I would strongly recommend the authors to refer other articles to learn how results are presented using quotes to support their argument/interpretation. Discussion Line $245+: The discussion section is well written, but authors attempted to discuss each piece of the information generated in the result section. Rather, I would recommend stepping back and see which points are most outstanding and deserve a focused discussion/argument to elevate the interpretation. This again will be linked to the earlier comment on the result section that require major revisions on its content. Therefore, I would recommend first to step back to the result section, complete the necessary revisions and come back to the discussion with the most powerful findings that you want to discuss with depth and made a conclusion on your study. Acknowledgements Line #367-368: I think you have participants who had invested their time and hence deserved to be acknowledged. Thanks Reviewer #2: The Article is well written and all the aspects are well explained. There sufficient information gathered to support the need and the significance of the the study. Methodology is well written to the extent of replication. The results of all the objectives have been met and illustrated. Discussion sound adequate and cover all the aspects. Reviewer #3: Consider reorganizing the introduction to follow a more logical flow: starting with the general need for pedagogical skills among health professionals, followed by the existing strategies in different European countries, and then narrowing down to the specific gap concerning rehabilitation professionals in Italy. It would be beneficial to highlight how your study's findings could contribute to the improvement of educational programs for health professionals, not just in Italy but potentially in other similar contexts. When referring to 'Northern ones', consider using 'Northern European countries' or a more precise term to maintain clarity and consistency. Some of the cited literature in the introduction section seems foundational but might be a bit dated. Including more recent studies or reviews on pedagogical training for health professionals, if available, could enhance the introduction's relevance. How was the decision made regarding the number of focus groups (three groups) and the size of each (5-6 participants)? Was this based on a saturation point or other methodological considerations? The study uses a 'dual moderator' focus group approach. Could you clarify why this particular method was chosen? How were the online focus groups managed to ensure engagement and minimize potential distractions or technical issues? Were any strategies implemented to maintain the quality of interaction? Why was Braun and Clark's Reflexive Thematic Analysis (RTA) selected for this study? How did you determine the naming of each theme (e.g., 'A Brave New Pedagogical World')? Were these names derived directly from participants' language, or did they emerge from the researchers' interpretation of the data? You mention the transformative experience that participants had regarding pedagogy. Consider expanding on how this experience aligns with adult learning theories (e.g., transformative learning theory or experiential learning theory). This can strengthen the theoretical underpinning of your findings. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Ahmed Ibrahim Al Kharusi Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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