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Original SubmissionMarch 21, 2021 |
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The findings are potentially interesting and could help guide statin prescription in the local setting. However, there are critical methodological issues that I included in the major issues section; they should be addressed to improve the study’s validity. I also included other comments and questions in the following section. Major issues: 1. Quality-adjusted life-years (QALYs) are the claimed primary health outcome in this analysis; however, the sources for quality adjustment are from the Global Burden of Disease studies, where health outcomes are disability-adjusted life years (DALYs). QALYs and DALYs are based on different theoretical grounds and use different methodologies, hence not interchangeable (Sassi, Health Policy and Planning 2006 provides a good overview of this comparison). This error is a fundamental misconception of the difference between QALYs and DALYs. It must be corrected through either converting the ICER metric to cost per DALYs averted or finding appropriate utility weights for estimating QALYs. 2. Based on my reading of the methods, HIV progression and care are not modeled in the simulation model, and CD4 cell count remains constant for the lifetime of model individuals. Even though the study limits its population to those who have been on ART for more than six months, CD4 cell count could still increase significantly and only asymptotes after several years (Gras et al., J Acquir Immune Defic Syndr 2007). Not accounting for changes in CD4 count may underestimate life expectancy (and in fact, the model trajectory of mortality was consistently higher than the mean observed values in Figure 1). 3. Figure 2: About half of the parameters have nearly zero influence on the ICERs, which is a very confusing result because these parameters should impact, in theory, either health or cost outcomes; the sensitivity analysis range for most parameters is not negligible either. Potential modeling/coding errors should be ruled out first; some explanations for this result are needed. Other comments: 1. This study is titled “When to start statins for people living with HIV in Thailand – A cost-effectiveness analysis,” but the analysis does not concern the timing of statin initiation at all. I suggest using a more appropriate title to indicate the key strategies actually explored, i.e., CVD risk thresholds. 2. While the methods section claims that the model was calibrated to observed data, it was unclear what approach (e.g., Goodness-of-fit measure, searching algorithm) was used to calibrate the model. The calibration approach should be clearly described. 3. This study uses n = 10,000 as the size of model cohort for the microsimulation model and n = 500 for probabilistic sensitivity analysis (PSA), which is much lower than typical sizes used in microsimulation models. I am concerned about the model stability due to stochastic uncertainty and would encourage the authors to use n = 100,000 for the model cohort and n = 1,000 for the PSA. 4. Figure 1: It would be helpful to provide the uncertainty interval from the model trajectories as well – It helps address concerns on model stability as well. 5. The methods section claims that quality-of-life adjustment for the disutility of pill-taking was not considered because the population is already required to take ART pills, which is a reasonable assumption. However, the results indicate that this disutility was indeed explored in their analysis, inconsistent with the methods description. I suggest rewording the methods to frame this disutility as a sensitivity analysis to make the flow consistent. 6. Following the rationale of not including the disutility of pill-taking due to ART use, I wonder if statin adherence should be assumed to be equal to rates observed in the general population. It may be higher because of the exact reason (no added disutility because PLHIV on ART are required to take daily pills already). It would be interesting to discuss this topic since adherence is a critical factor in statin use guidelines. 7. The utility weight for those without a history of CVD was set at 1, which is too high considering this is an HIV-positive population. The authors should first fix the misuse of DALY weights for estimating QALYs, and if they decide to switch to DALYs as the health outcomes, GBD estimates could be used for this value. For example, GBD 2016 estimated a disability weight of 0.078 for PLHIV on ART. 8. Scenario analyses: What is the rationale for using this alternative Rama-EGAT equation as a scenario analysis? The Rama-EGAT equation was developed from an HIV-negative population and was not validated in PLHIV. Reviewer #2: This is a well written article with nice statistical analysis. It would have been worthwhile to use widely accepted ASCVD risk calculation from AHA/ACC for sensitivity analysis including only people with >40years. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Atherosclerotic cardiovascular disease thresholds for statin initiation among people living with HIV in Thailand: A cost-effectiveness analysis PONE-D-21-09045R1 Dear Dr. Boettiger, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ismaeel Yunusa, PharmD, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-09045R1 Atherosclerotic cardiovascular disease thresholds for statin initiation among people living with HIV in Thailand: A cost-effectiveness analysis Dear Dr. Boettiger: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Ismaeel Yunusa Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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