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Original SubmissionDecember 29, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-40871 High transgene expression is associated with systemic GFP silencing in Nicotiana benthamiana PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hendrix, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The current manuscript does not fully meet the publication criteria of the conclusions being supported by the provided results and the methods being adequately described. Note that the decision of Major Revision is based on assumption that some additional data will need to be provided to address Reviewer 1's concerns. Both reviewers have provided suggestions that would generally improve the manuscript that should also be considered. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 06 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors produced a series of N. benthamiana lines expressing GFP transgene constructs. Single copy events were used to compare their response to a silencing trigger with seedlings of the 16C line. As a transgene the newly generated lines contained either the authentic genome-integrated transgene sequence of the 16C line (pMON417669) or they harboured the 16C line sequence lacking the partial transposase (pMON417670). GFP expression analysis revealed no significant differences in GFP expression levels between individuals of the two lines indicating that the transposase sequence did not enhance GFP expression. In contrast, a transgenic line (NT_W22241804) containing two copies of the pMON417670 transgene displayed a GFP expression level that was similar to that of the 16C line. Using a topically applied synthetic 22nt GFP-targeting siRNA, local silencing was induced in all plants with strong silencing phenotypes in the 16C and NT_W22241804 lines and weak GFP silencing in all other lines. sRNA-seq data demonstrated that secondary sRNA production was initiated in all locally silenced lines. 22nt siRNA-mediated silencing of an endogenous CHL-H gene was also associated with transitivity but the secondary sRNA profile clearly differed from the GFP-specific sRNA profiles. Importantly, initiation of systemic silencing was only found upon local silencing of the 16C and NT_W22241804 lines. Based on these findings together with the observation that GFP hemizygous progeny of genetic cross of the 16C line with N. benthamiana wildtype plants failed to develop systemic silencing post 22nt siRNA application, the authors concluded that induction of systemic silencing is correlated with high levels of transgene expression. Major points: We conclude that high transgene expression level is a key enabler of systemic transgene silencing in N. benthamiana. In addition to the suggested high transgene expression level, the efficiency of the silencing trigger may have an impact on the initiation of systemic silencing. However, this issue has not been addressed in the present study. Thus, the conclusion that the transgene expression level is a key enabler of systemic transgene silencing should be taken with care. Although the CD-associated 22nt siRNA induced systemic silencing in the homozygous 16C line application of CD:dsRNAs may have an impact on the initiation of systemic silencing. Thus, this reviewer strongly recommends to conduct agroinfiltration experiments using hemizygous 16C plants. Infiltration of an efficient GFP silencing inducer, e.g. GFP hairpin RNA transgene construct, will provide additional evidence that hemizygous 16C plants are indeed unable to develop systemic silencing. sRNA profiles: sense and antisense of 21, 22 an 24nt siRNAs should be presented. The profiles of 19-25nt sRNAs may be included in the Supporting Information. Sense sRNA profiles also contain GFP degradation products. Thus, it is important to separately analyse sense and antisense sRNA reads. A focus on 21, 22 and 24nt siRNAs will accentuate the number and distribution of the putatively functional sRNAs that are predominantly DCL products. In particular, in the “systemic leaves” of NT_W22241793 and NT_W22241802 lines, only the presence of antisense sRNAs will indicate that the accumulating sRNAs derived from the silencing machinery. In this context, it is also important to show CHL-H-specific antisense siRNA (21, 22, ant 24nt) accumulation. The authors should also comment on the observation that “5’ transitive” sRNAs of the CHL-H transcripts are missing. Why no 5’ mRNA degradation products with sense orientation are detected? Finally, in Fig. S1, separate presentation of sense and antisense sRNAs will probably demonstrate that the sRNAs only correspond to GFP-specific degradation products (only sense sRNAs) and not to DCL products. This reviewer predicts that the number of antisense sRNAs, if detectable at all, will be extremely low. In Fig. S1, the size distribution of the sRNAs would make sense. It will show if 21nt sRNAs are predominantly accumulating or if 19 to 25 nt sRNAs are almost equally accumulating. Equal distribution of 19 to 25 nt sRNAs would argue for a mRNA degradation-based origin. Figure 2S is missing. Minor points: Page 11, line 86: Using a grafting approach, the authors showed that DCL2 was required in distal tissue to respond to mobile silencing signal but not required in the initiating tissue to produce the signal. This issue is controversially discussed. Taochy et al. (2017) reported that DCL2 is required in both the source rootstock and the recipient shoot tissue for efficient RDR6-dependent systemic PTGS. Page 15, line 192: The solution was applied to the leaf surfaces using an Iwata HP-M1 handheld airbrush sprayer. Please, indicate the applied pressure. Where the authors purchase from Silwet S279? I only know BreakThru S279 and Silwet L-77. References should be revised. See Chen et al., 2018, name of the journal (Plant Physiol) is missing or McHale et al. 2013, The Plant journal : for cell and molecular biology. 534 2013;76(3):519-29. Please, note that References were not fully reviewed! Reviewer #2: The manuscript of Bill Hendrix and colleagues titled "High transgene expression is associated with systemic GFP silencing in Nicotiana benthamiana" presents results of the study focused on the reasons that predispose some transgenic lines to systemic silencing after topical application of dsRNA. The impact of three possible factors was assessed; i) presence of transposase gene fragment, ii) occurrence of 5’ transitivity and iii) transgene expression level. The study is smartly designed, well described and the results are well interpreted. Based on the results, the authors conclude that the high expression level is associated with systemic silencing, while neither of the other two factors seemed to be involved. Since the main conclusion is based just on two transgenic lines, the authors admit that the impact of some other (co-)factors cannot be excluded. However, since the hemizygous lines derived from 16C line were resistant to systemic silencing, it is hard to find other explanation than that provided by the authors. There are just few points that should be added or corrected. Otherwise I regard the study suitable for publication in PLOS One. Minor comments: Line 188: Please, provide details on the applied dsRNA (sequences, presence of any modification, method of hybridization of complementary strands, provider of the chemical synthesis). Line: 152, 184, 363: Please, correct the order, labelling and access to supplementary data. The supplementary files should be referred in the ascending order (S1, S2, S3). Line 452-454: The sentence is duplicated. Line 258: Please, indicate whether the double-copy insertion lines used for experiments was homozygous for both integration sites (its sister lines hemizygous for one or two insertions would be a good control in subsequent experiments). Fig 1 legend: Please correct the sentence “Tissue was collected from the first two true leaves were untreated seedling.” Fig. 5: Please, provide data for one hemizygous F1 line also in panel B. If I understand well, the raw data obtained in the study should be publically available, but I did not find a link to repository of the siRNA seq data. The quality of Figs was really poor in the provided PDF file. It should be checked next time. It is necessary to provide better resolution for publication!!! Additional suggestion for the authors’ (editor’s) consideration: 1) It is my feeling that the title might be more attractive if switched to "Systemic GFP silencing in Nicotiana benthamiana is associated with high transgene expression" 2) The terminology (e.g. “silencing in plants using topical dsRNA“) and some result details described in the abstract might be not fully understandable/attractive for readers, who are not sufficiently familiar with the issues.¨ 3) Transitive siRNA levels were higher in hemizygous lines compared to the double copy line, so it seems that the expression level in distal leaves is more important compared to the expression level in the site of infiltration. Grafting experiments might be helpful. 4) The order of analyzed lines might be the same in different figures ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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